{"id":5224,"date":"2012-04-08T04:15:48","date_gmt":"2012-04-08T09:15:48","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/onthe8spot.com\/?p=5224"},"modified":"2012-04-08T04:15:48","modified_gmt":"2012-04-08T09:15:48","slug":"for-language-lawyersletters-of-note-c-s-lewis-on-writing","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"http:\/\/onthe8spot.com\/index.php\/2012\/04\/08\/for-language-lawyersletters-of-note-c-s-lewis-on-writing\/","title":{"rendered":"For language lawyers::Letters of Note: C. S. Lewis on Writing"},"content":{"rendered":"<blockquote><p>About amn&#8217;t I, aren&#8217;t I and am I not, of course there are no right or wrong answers about language in the sense in which there are right and wrong answers in Arithmetic. &#8220;Good English&#8221; is whatever educated people talk; so that what is good in one place or time would not be so in another. Amn&#8217;t I was good 50 years ago in the North of Ireland where I was brought up, but bad in Southern England. Aren&#8217;t I would have been hideously bad in Ireland but very good in England. And of course I just don&#8217;t know which (if either) is good in modern Florida. Don&#8217;t take any notice of teachers and textbooks in such matters. Nor of logic. It is good to say &#8220;more than one passenger was hurt,&#8221; although more than one equals at least two and therefore logically the verb ought to be plural were not singular was!<br \/>\nWhat really matters is:\u2013<br \/>\n1. Always try to use the language so as to make quite clear what you mean and make sure your sentence couldn&#8217;t mean anything else.<br \/>\n2. Always prefer the plain direct word to the long, vague one. Don&#8217;t implement promises, but keep them.<br \/>\n3. Never use abstract nouns when concrete ones will do. If you mean &#8220;More people died&#8221; don&#8217;t say &#8220;Mortality rose.&#8221;<br \/>\n4. In writing. Don&#8217;t use adjectives which merely tell us how you want us to feel about the thing you are describing. I mean, instead of telling us a thing was &#8220;terrible,&#8221; describe it so that we&#8217;ll be terrified. Don&#8217;t say it was &#8220;delightful&#8221;; make us say &#8220;delightful&#8221; when we&#8217;ve read the description. You see, all those words (horrifying, wonderful, hideous, exquisite) are only like saying to your readers, &#8220;Please will you do my job for me.&#8221;<br \/>\n5. Don&#8217;t use words too big for the subject. Don&#8217;t say &#8220;infinitely&#8221; when you mean &#8220;very&#8221;; otherwise you&#8217;ll have no word left when you want to talk about something really infinite.<br \/>\nThanks for the photos. You and Aslan both look v. well. I hope you&#8217;ll like your new home.<br \/>\nWith love<br \/>\nyours<br \/>\nC.S. Lewis<br \/>\nvia <a href=\"http:\/\/www.lettersofnote.com\/2012\/04\/c-s-lewis-on-writing.html\">Letters of Note: C. S. 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